(Closed) I should be sleeping but instead I'm proofing invitations. Please help :)

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

too small to see πŸ™

Post # 6
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: November 1999

pretty invites…don’t see any errors.

although the spelling of ‘Chili crusted chicken breast’ looks odd to me as I’m used to seeing it spelt with a ‘double L’….both ways are correct By The WayLaughing

Post # 8
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

I don’t see any errors either – they look great!

Post # 9
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

It all looks good to me!

Post # 11
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: October 2012

@Happy7:  Yes!  Since it is the parking lot of the Bay School, it should be “Parking in Bay School’s lot is permitted.”

Post # 12
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Bumble bee

I think they are cute! I love the colours and fonts used. Also the fact that you are including the children in the invite is really awesome πŸ™‚ 

Couple things I noticed: 

On the map: Pacific Ocean is missing an i between the c and f. Also – Ribera is spelt a different way in the text below the map.

And yes to the Bay School’s. 

Other then that looks good!

 

Post # 13
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

The block of text looks so busy to me in the directions.  Maybe you could bullet it and make it more straight forward?  Something like this:

From Carmel

  • Head South on HWY 1
  • Pass Ribera Road, continue for .3 miles
  • Parking at Bay School is permitted and will be located on your right
  • Walk down the private road towards houses and follow path to the right of service gate

Post # 15
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Bumble bee

@Happy7:  happy to help! πŸ™‚

 

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