(Closed) Context added: I want your brutal honesty

posted 6 years ago in Christian
Post # 3
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: July 2012

Interesting, but kind of hard to understand the “point” of it with out knowing the author or context.

Post # 4
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2012

Seems like a bit of a self-indulgent ramble to me. I had a hard time figuring out what her point is.

Post # 5
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Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2011

Sounds Christophobic to me, written by someone who expects tolerency but who is intolerent.

Post # 7
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

It’s interesting but there’s too much mystery. It sounds like you have a serious point to make but I’m not sure what it is. I think you could add what it is about you that’s so different or unacceptable… maybe more about your experience trying to fit into this mold. It could also use some editting but I’m guessing you’re not there yet. I’d like to read any changes you make and the final product 🙂

Post # 9
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2011

I dont get it.

Post # 10
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Honey bee

I read it twice and I don’t understand what the point is.

Post # 11
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2010

@Mrs. Fireworks: Agreed. I mean, the writing is good, and it’s got a lot of fire, but I’m not sure I really get the point unless it’s just meant as a kind of rant/push-back against perceived judgment from a religious group.

Post # 12
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: November 1999

It starts with   “I am going to tell a story about my experience.”  

But then there really isn’t any story.  

I didn’t find it to be clear at all.

Post # 13
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Buzzing Beekeeper

If she’s so self assured in her choices and convictions, why the need to write a rambling essay about it? Just be who you are. Maybe some context would clarify this a little.

Post # 14
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: May 2011

Reads like a journal entry. I’m not getting what her point is.

Post # 15
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Honey bee

How can you be “honest” and “authentic” when it’s clear you don’t really want to communicate anything substantive and comprehensible?

Post # 16
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

I would interpret that as someone who has offended someone else, and rather than apologize, she’s gone on a rant about the opression of women, topped off with a dollop of “Jesus loves me so I don’t care what you think”.  However, as stated, minus the context it’s hard to say.  She might be a total dick, she might be making an excellent point.

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