(Closed) Invitation Critique Please :)

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Sugar bee

More formal invitation always write out the words for the numbers in the date, time, etc., i.e. the twenty-second of September, four o’clock.

I also think it sounds a little odd to say “4 o’clock in the evening,” I would probably opt for “afternoon.”

Post # 4
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Bee Keeper

I agree with the PP…4 is in the afternoon.

Also…the bride and her parents names usually go first….especially if they are hosting.

Post # 5
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: July 2012 - Baltimore Museum of Industry

I would make For lowercase. Also- Miss Piggy should go above Kermit. What about making the “&” in the same script you use for the names?

Post # 6
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

@KCKnd2:  I actually consider 4 evening too! But I guess there is some usual ettiquete with that…

Also,  I would take off the italics, and I agree with everything KCK said.  I would also space out that bottom portion to not mix time and location

Post # 7
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: October 2012

I think “are joined in marriage” sounds better than “join in marriage”.

I’m so glad Kermit and Piggy are finally getting married!!

4 is definitely afternoon

5 can be either afternoon or evening depending on the formality of the wedding (I had to figure this out as our ceremony is at 5 pm)

6 is evening

Post # 10
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: April 2012

for a celebration of love doesn’t need to be capitalized, because it is part of the sentence.

Have you considered any other fonts?

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