(Closed) Invitation gurus! Need someone to proofread invitations before I print them…

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Buzzing bee

It looks good to me!

Post # 5
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: May 2011

I caught a few things that you may want to fix!

First, there should be a period after the Mrs in your mom’s name.  Also, I know you mentioned that your parents are divorced, but I feel as though there should still be an & or “and” between their names.

Second, you wrote “son of Mr. and Mrs. Ronald & Nancy Kerr.”  Etiquette wise, you’re not supposed to separate the man’s first name from his last name(I think it’s a dumb rule).  So, your options would be either “Mrs. and Mr. Ronald Kerr”  OR “Mrs. Nancy & Mr. Ronald Kerr.”  I personally prefer the second because you still get to use the woman’s first name ๐Ÿ™‚ 

Good luck with printing!

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