(Closed) Invitation Opinions! PIP

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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2681 posts
Sugar bee

I think it looks great, I love the big “&” between your names!

Post # 4
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2010

The reception spacing seems off to me.  I would try to fit the word “Ballroom” on the line above it if you can.

Also, if this is just a screenshot, you can type in fake names and then you won’t have to blur everything out 🙂

Post # 5
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Newbee
  • Wedding: December 2015

I think it is really, really hard to judge with the smudges. Is there any way you can substitute some filler text, like jibberish where the pertinent info would be?

Post # 6
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Buzzing bee

I love the design, I would just make a few adjustments to the text.  1. Put a space between your fiance’s parents’ names and the date and time info.  2. You can cut out a lot of the wording for the reception.  I assume both events are at the same country club so there is no need to repeat the name.  You can just say “Dinner Reception in the Ballroom immediately following” 

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