(Closed) Invitation Opinions?

posted 12 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
51 posts
Worker bee

my vote is for right justified. It just pops!

Post # 4
112 posts
Blushing bee
  • Wedding: November 2019

I like the Right justified.  It just looks "right" to me.  Great job on the design!

Post # 5
536 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2019 - The Desmond Hotel in Malvern, PA

I also like the right justifed version….. but can I make a tiny suggestion?  I would suggest that you either do away with "at" and "on" (the two lone words on individual lines at the moment) or move them down to the next line (respectively).  I believe etiquette says that these words are not necessary in an invitation, but if you do include them I think they are supposed to be on the same line as what you’re referencing.  Since it is right justified, it looks a little peculiar to me that these words are all by their lonesome, especially since they aren’t meant to emphasize anything.

I usually lay things out like this:


Invite you to share in a celebration of love

as they exchange marriage vows


Saturday, the sixth of September  (there should be a comma after Saturday)

Two thousand eight

Four o’clock in the afternoon


Also, and this is just the OCD designer in me (I design wedding invites all day long as my job!), but "two thousand and eight" should actually be "two thousand eight" — no "and."  This is actually a common mistake on invitations, but including the "and" is grammatically incorrect.

Hope you don’t mind my two cents 🙂   I just know how we all want everything to be perfect!  The design is lovely!

Post # 7
1458 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2008

For sure the right justified, it really adds something to it. It looks fabulous by the way! I am in awe! How beautiful!!!!!

Post # 8
73 posts
Worker bee
  • Wedding: June 2007

my vote is for right justified too- it looks great!

Post # 9
54 posts
Worker bee
  • Wedding: October 2008

the right justified looks really nice

Post # 10
77 posts
Worker bee

I like the right justified also!

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