(Closed) Invitation proof came today!

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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6221 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: August 2013 - The Liberty House

I don’t love the wording of “as best friends become husband and wife”. I don’t think you have to have best friends in there and it would be better as “as they become husband and wife” or something like that

ETA I know that wording I suggested before is horrible, I just don’t agree with the grammatical ambiguity of the sentence as it is now

Post # 4
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3572 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

Very cute!  I think putting the word “transition” on the invitation would be a mistake.  I like it as is. 

Post # 6
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1475 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

I think you should either have 09.07.2013 or 9.7.2013 (I prefer 09.07.2013).. Why is there a “0” in front of the 9, but not the 7?

 

It is cute though! Gives off a casual, fun feel for the wedding.

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