(Closed) Invitation Wording

posted 9 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
272 posts
Helper bee

Looks great!  The only change I would suggest to keep it formal is:

at half past four o’clock or at half past four in the afternoon

Post # 4
3344 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

I’m guessing the ceremony and reception are at the same place? If so, I think it’s perfect!

Post # 5
210 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: May 2010

Looks good!

I would probably change “their marriage” to “their marriage ceremony” or “their wedding”

Post # 6
1022 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

Also, technically there should be no “and” in the year.  It should say “two thousand ten” instead of “two thousand and ten”. 

and ditto what @cinnamonroll said about the time.

Post # 8
1580 posts
Bumble bee

what font is that? I love it!

Post # 10
2394 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: April 2010

If you want to be super-picky, technically you only use “the honor of your presence” when the marriage ceremony takes place in a church.  The (equally formal) verbiage for a non-church wedding (even if the officiant is religiously affiliated) is “the pleasure of your company.”


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