(Closed) Invitation Wording

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
Hostess
18643 posts
Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2009

I really like the wording!  I would suggest putting in a fake address on Weddingbee to be safe though.

Post # 4
Member
10851 posts
Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: September 2010

For some reason the first line sounds a little awkward to me. What about “A lifetime of love begins for  ____ & _____ when we pledge our love…..”?

Post # 5
Member
272 posts
Helper bee

From your wording it implies that for whatever reason this event isn’t a legal wedding.  If that’s the case it’s perfect, but otherwise you may want to actually include the word “marriage,” “wedding,” or “matrimony.”  What about…

Love for a lifetime

will begin when we,

Please join

XXX

and

XXX

as they pledge our their love for a lifetime on

Saturday, June twelfth

Two thousand and then

at five ‘o clock in the afternoon

Lenexa Conference Center

11184 Lackman Road

Lenexa, Kansas

 

(Reception?  R.s.v.p.?)

Post # 6
Member
647 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: June 2011

I agree with Cinnamon Roll, if you’re getting married there should be a more formal reference to “marriage” or “ceremony”.

Post # 7
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Newbee
  • Wedding: June 2010

I had the same problem when I was trying to word ours. We went with

Love Fills a moment

A moment fills a lifetime

A lifetime begins eternity

Our eternity begins here

At the wedding of

Mrs

and 

Mr 

We  request the honor of your presence

to celebrate the first of the rest of our lives

On DATE At

PLACE

 

I thought it was so nice. And since our wedding is kinda casual I thought it was perfect. Good luck tho. It’s hard

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