(Closed) Invitation Wording

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Newbee
  • Wedding: December 2011

It’s very nice and sweet, it’s not something that I would personally choose, but I think it’s nice and personal – and that’s really all that matters

Post # 4
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

I think the idea is sweet, but the switching points of view is confusing and reads a little “off.” Who is the “us”?

Post # 5
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

a little bird told us that 

Ashley 

and

Nathan

are getting married!

Because you have shared in

our lives

by your friendship and love we   take all of this out – from “because” to “we”

Together with our parents,

we invite you to share

the beginning of our new life together

when we exchange marriage vows.

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