(Closed) Invitation wording??

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
Member
4366 posts
Honey bee
  • Wedding: September 2018

If you don’t like the “Because”  you could replace it with “Since” 🙂

Post # 4
Member
13289 posts
Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

I think because is fine, but since works well as PP said.

On another note, having the year on a separate line than the date (and blended into the time) looks kind of funny to me.  I got confused when I read it at first.

Post # 5
Hostess
16191 posts
Honey Beekeeper

Something like this?

You have shared in our lives
with your friendship and love, and now, we,
Mr. Football
and 
Mrs. Football,
together with our parents,
invite you to share in the beginning
of our new life together as we exchange marriage vows 

on Friday, the eleventh of May 
two thousand eighteen
at half after four o’clock 

The Hall of Casa Monica 
Four North Bend Avenue 
St. Augustine, Florida

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