(Closed) Invitation wording help

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: May 2011

what about

You have been a part of our lives

Now please be a part of our celebration

of love, friendship and family

I used an all caps font on my invites to avoid any upper v lowercase debates.

Post # 5
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4137 posts
Honey bee
  • Wedding: May 2011

i like lgenz’s wording for the beginning.

you don’t say what you’re inviting them to though, at least from a grammatical standpoint…it should be

Christina

and (lowercase)

Thomas

request the honour of your presence

as they unite in holy matrimony (or similar wording)

on Sunday, etc.

Post # 6
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693 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2011

So, I just found out  – Its Two Thousand Eleven (not and eleven) http://blog.invitationbox.com/tag/how-to-write-out-2010/

 

I am not sure about caps/lowercase but this is what I would do:

You have been a part of our lives

Please join us as we celebrate

our love, friendship, and families

 

Christina Posadas

and

Thomas Cassidy

 

request the honour of your presence

on Sunday, the twenty-sixth of June

Two thousand eleven

at half past two in the afternoon

St. Lucy’s Church

118 Seventh Avenue

Newark, New Jersey

 

Reception to follow at five o’clock in the evening

The Tides Estate

1245 Belmont Avenue

North Haledon, New Jersey

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