(Closed) Invitation Wording Help

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2011

First off, WELCOME TO THE HIVE!!!  Love having another over forty bride on the boards!

I like what you have but I would go with your second option of 13 years in the making.  I love the awkward dancing comment – hysterical!

Post # 4
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

I like it and I agree on the 13 years in the making too!

Post # 5
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: June 2012

ok, my totally honest opinion?  I’m not sure about the ‘forgetting to make you his wife’ part.  because it sounds kind of resentful and i’m pretty sure that’s not the message you want to be sending out on your invites!  I think it would sound better to have something about how ‘Somewhere along the way, we forgot to tie the knot’ or something.

but i love the idea of a poem, I think it’s really cute!

Post # 6
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

Here is what I think sounds best; (IMO)

Time moves so quickly and so does life.
Along the way, they made a life.
After thirteen years in the making

She will now become his wife.

Great pleasure there would be
To have your company
As they become husband and wife
And continue their happy life

Post # 8
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: June 2012

@Sandl: oh yes, much better!!! love it, love it!

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