(Closed) Invitation Wording Help

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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828 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

“Together with God” makes it seem like you’re on the same level which I don’t believe is the intention.

 

Why don’t you just say 

“Jane Smith

and

John Doe
Request the honour of your presence

 As they exchange marriage vows before God

On Saturday, the first of January

At six o’ clock”

Post # 4
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1111 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: October 2012

@Zusie:  That’s what I was thinking, too, but I can’t think of another way to word it.  I get what you’re going for, but “together with God” makes it sound like you had a meeting with God & he’s helping you pay for the wedding.  Wink

Post # 5
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1111 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: October 2012

I just searched around the ol’ Google to find some ideas (clearly I’m working super hard at work today…).  What about these?

God has blessed us with

love and friendship.

We, Stacia Clinton and

Jeffory Hilton

have chosen to begin our new

life together on

Saturday, May 4, 2010

We joyously invite

you to witness as we exchange

marriage vows

and celebrate with us

at 10 a.m.

St. Matthew’s Church

100 Main Street

New York, New York


Two lives united in friendship,

Two friends united in love,

One love united in Christ.

Lisa Stanton

and

Clifford Cosby

request the honour of your presence

as Christ unites them to become one

Saturday, the second of April

Two thousand ten

at half-past twelve in the afternoon

St. Mary’s Chapel

New York, New York

Reception immediately following


God has led two lives

to take one path

Tanya Leslie Ball

and

David John Aniston

invite you to share in the joy

of their marriage

on Saturday, June twenty third

Two thousand ten

at four o’clock in the afternoon

St. Mark’s Church

100 Main Street

New York, NY

Reception immediately following

Post # 6
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386 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

Why together with God”  why not try “Because you have shared in 
our lives by your friendship and love, we 

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