(Closed) Invitation wording help!

posted 4 years ago in Paper
Post # 1
Member
503 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: November 2013

Hello!!

Does this wording sound okay to you?

“Together with their families,
the honor of your presence is requested
at the marriage of

Sara Lastname
and
Kyle Lastname

Saturday
November 23
2013
4:30 p.m.

Church
Church Address

Reception to follow
at reception venue” 

 

We want casual and simple.

Post # 3
Member
1663 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

I think it’s a little awkward to go from “together with their families” to requesting presence.  My preference would be:

 

Together with their families

Bride’s name

and

Groom’s name

Request the honor of your presence 

at their marriage

 

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