(Closed) Invitation wording help!

posted 5 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
1663 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

I think it’s a little awkward to go from “together with their families” to requesting presence.  My preference would be:


Together with their families

Bride’s name


Groom’s name

Request the honor of your presence 

at their marriage



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