(Closed) Invitation wording – help me choose!

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
9029 posts
Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2011

My invite wording was similar to the 2nd one.. So I vote for that

Post # 4
1664 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: May 2011

First, are you getting married in place of worship? I think (but check on this) that honor is only used if you are getting married in a church, etc.

Second, I think the first one might flow better if you put “together with their parents” before your names.

I think either version works.  Use the second if it is important to you to specifically name your parents.

Post # 5
6394 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: September 2011

I like the first one better because when you add where the  ceremony and things are, it will flow so much more easily.

Post # 6
5786 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: May 2011

I used the second set of wording for our invites, just sounded a little neater/more concise

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