(Closed) Invitation wording is this too cheesy?

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
675 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: April 2013

@muzikfreek13:  Hmm, it’s a very cute idea, but maybe for a STD or the website?? My only concern is that it doesn’t read too smoothly, so had you not originally explained it, I’m not sure I would have really understood on first glance. Really cute idea though, defintiely find some place to use it! Maybe even on programs?

Post # 4
5075 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: October 2012

not for the invites.  Too informal and wordy for a dressy, formal wedding invitation.   I’d print it out and frame it – put it near the guest book or cake – with pics of you guys from that time period.

Post # 5
296 posts
Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

I think it’s a really cute poem, and I am all for non traditional invite wording. My concern would be how long it is. I know I couldn’t have fit the whole poem on my invitations. Maybe cut it to justa  few lines and reveal the entire poem on the program (if you’re having one).

Post # 6
1562 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: November 2011

I would love to see your poem in your ceremony programs, and have more traditional wording on your invites.  Sorry.  

Post # 7
82 posts
Worker bee
  • Wedding: June 2014 - The Millennium Center

I agree with PPs, I would rather see it on a program or STD than on the actual invite.

Post # 8
1021 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

I was thinking your wedding website would be perfect for this, but I agree with others that the ceremony program would also be a great place for it. It does seem a little long for a formal invitation and might add to the cost too.

Post # 10
2239 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: October 2012

I wouldn’t use it for invites — I’d use it in a program or print it out and frame it.  Sit it out by the guestbook or something.  It’s too adorable to not use but it seems a bit long for invite wording.

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