(Closed) Invitation wording.. what do you think?

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: October 2018

I like it! Short, sweet, and to the point. I would do the last part as one cohesive sentence, though. The breaks make it read a little awkwardly. 

Post # 4
1748 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: May 2013

I like the “love, family, and friendship” bit.

Post # 6
847 posts
Busy bee
  • Wedding: December 2015

@awoah82:  it’s nice but i think it should be ‘with great joy’ or something, because ‘with joy’ sounds wrong. 

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