(Closed) Invitation Wording…Editor Bees Please Take a Look

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: August 2012

You might put it in quotes? A lot of people start their invites with a nice quote or saying at the top, I think its fine!

Post # 4
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2012

@HueysLuda:  You were probably asking for general wording and not proofreading, but my English Professor instincts kicked in. Sorry:

“To everything there is a reason, a time, and a purpose” (Ecclesiastes 3:1). On this day I will marry my best friend, the one I will laugh with, live for, love…

Jane Doe and Joe Schmo 
request the honor of your presence to witness their promise to each other on Saturday, the Fourth of August, Two Thousand Twelve 
at Five O’Clock in the evening at the Church 
212 East Capitol Street, Southeast, Washington, DC 20003

Cocktails, dinner, and good times to follow.

 

–I think it sounds lovely.

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