(Closed) Invitation wording/font feedback

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: May 2012

I’d love to comment! I think you forgot to attach the photo though :o)

Post # 5
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

It looks good to me. If you add a poll you’ll get more feedback.

Post # 6
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: May 2012

I think that fonts are great.  Maybe make your names a bit larger???

 

Post # 7
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Blushing bee

I love the bottom font, but I agree I’m not sure they go together. However, I prefer the bottom font so I’d be inclined to change the name font.

 

What font is the bottom font?

Post # 9
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: November 2012

Both fonts are serif (more flourishes) so they’re competing for attention.  I love Edwardian Script for the names, but try using a sans serif font for the rest- it will have more balance and keep the focus on your names.

Post # 10
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: April 2012

Requesting the honor of one’s presence is reserved for a house of worship.  It would be more appropriate to request the pleasure of their company.  Also you don’t need the “on” in front of Wednesday, the twelfth of December.  You could also just write “six o’clock in the evening” without the at. 

I agree with the previous comments about using a sans serif font instead of the one you selected. 

 

Post # 11
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Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

I am not a fan of the very different fonts. 

I also agree that “honor of your presence” is reserved for a church wedding.

Post # 13
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: April 2012

Maybe try it in all caps or small caps.  I agree that it looks better with the at.

If you don’t like the pleasure of your company, the other option is “cordially invite you” which I don’t care for.

Post # 14
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: March 2012 - Pelican Grand Beach Resort

You don’t need the “at” before six o’clock just like you don’t need an “on” before Wednesday. I think the new sans serif font is better, but too cutsy. Whatever font you choose for that, though, I’d personally use it for the ampersand as well.

Post # 16
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: May 2012

I like the changes you made but feel like you should use all lowercase with the lower font.  Also maybe adding something along the top of your names in the lower font such as “Together with their families,” to really frame your names.

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