(Closed) Invitation wording….what do you think….Is the writers block broken??

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Helper bee

Sounds beautiful.  Smile   I’m assuming ‘together with our children’ was accidentally cut and pasted into it.

Post # 4
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: July 2010

I like it for a semi formal wedding. If it’s formal I would write out the date as well. I would actually assume you have children together. If this is the case, I think it’s cute to include them in the invite. I actually saw one  that read e.g., “Jane Doe requests the honor of your presence at the marraige of her parents”. I thought that was very cute in this day and age.

Post # 5
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Helper bee

Oh!  I get it…. I thought it was left over from wordings where parents hosted.  But… that makes a lot more sense, future mrs kirsch, haha. 

Post # 6
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: January 2011

It’s ok, although it doesn’t include your children as much as I thought (from your other post) you wanted. Check out getwedding.com They actually have a ton of choices, even if some are a bit outdated. I got some of my favorite ones from there.

Post # 9
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Helper bee

It’s a little redundant.  What about…

 

It is with great joy that

Jane Doe

&

John Doe

together with their children

request the pleasure of your company

as their lives are joined forever

in friendship, love, and marriage

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