Post # 1
Need thoughts– we have the place but not the room number. I came up with this for the invitations– does it work? what does it need?
Mountain Man and Retread Bride invite you to share
in the celebration of their union
in our private suite
Saturday, July 30, 2011
at eight pm in the evening
Golden Nugget Casino
Las Vegas, Nevada
cowboy hat optional
Post # 3
I’m not too good at this, but it sounds good to me – how are they going to know what room #? Could you put a note toward the bottom (maybe under the hat thing) about “concierge will direct you to our private suite,” or something along those lines?
Post # 4
Can you contact the hotel and find out what suite they’ll put you in?
I’d also use: eight o’clock in the evening (instead of pm)
Also – is there any sort of reception to follow? cocktails, toasts, etc?
Post # 5
yeah “8pm in the evening” is a bit repetitive since PM and Evening mean the same thing.
I would chose either 8pm or 8pm in the evening and technically 8pm is more night than evening