(Closed) Invite Proof Read please!

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
1014 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: May 2011


there’s only a few things I would change…

Together with their parents

*** A Hotsauce and *** N Hotsauce

request the pleasure of your company

at their marriage celebration

Saturday, the second of June

Two thousand twelve

at four-thirty in the afternoon

*** Maple Barn 3325 *** Road, ***, Ontario

Reception to follow





Post # 4
103 posts
Blushing bee

Apparently it’s technically half past four in the afternoon. Otherwise I’m with PP 🙂


Post # 5
5183 posts
Bee Keeper

I like @simplifiedbride:‘s changes.


A Hotsauce and N Hotsauce 

Request the honour of your presence at their marriage on

Saturday, the Second of June 

Two thousand twelve 

At four-thirty in THE afternoon

Maple Barn 3325 XXX Road, XXX, Ontario

Reception to follow


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