(Closed) Invite Proof

posted 4 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

I don’t see any grammar errors, but man that script font is difficult to read.

 

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Post # 4
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2014 - Smithfield Center

Maybe it’s me, but is there a comma after Garcia? If so I see the purpose but I feel like a big ‘and’ between the parents names would look better.

This isn’t a grammatical error, but the J in John is cutting over the S in Saturday, same with the P in Randolph over the O in October. It might look ‘okay’ online but in print I bet you this is going to be unsightly. I would consider spacing everything from ‘Saturday ….October’ down some so it’s not only not as crowded but letters aren’t overlapping.

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