(Closed) invite wording…. does this sound right?

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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1927 posts
Buzzing bee

The only thing I don’t like is the “as they are joined together in marriage”.. it’s a little too wordy for me.  I would just say “request the honor of your presence at their marriage”.

Also.. make sure you include the actualy address of the church.  I’m guessing you just pulled it off for privacy reasons on the website but I wanted to make sure.

Post # 4
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3219 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: November 2010

I like it as is! but I agree with PP be sure to put the address if you didnt already plan on it

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