(Closed) Invite wording…. which is better??

posted 6 years ago in Paper
  • poll: Which do you like better??
    Option 1 - the journey : (3 votes)
    33 %
    Option 2 - basic : (6 votes)
    67 %
  • Post # 4
    Member
    586 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: June 2012

    I like both but the first one seems more original and sticks out to me more.

    Post # 5
    Member
    5075 posts
    Bee Keeper
    • Wedding: October 2012

    The first one is more personal – but you’ll need to correct the spelling

    Life’s loveliest journeys

    (sorry, I’m anal about spelling lol)

     

    Post # 7
    Member
    3482 posts
    Sugar bee
    • Wedding: February 2011

    I will preface this by saying I have weird pet peeves, so maybe this is just me, but in option 1 I can’t stand that the first two lines rhyme, and I’m not crazy about “Love” coming right after “loveliest”…too much sound repetition.

    But I think option 2 sounds beautiful, and it’s definitely not too stuffy. It sounds friendly, romantic and natural. The first one’s a bit like a Hallmark card Embarassed

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