(Closed) Is this wording ok?

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
7901 posts
Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: March 2012 - Pelican Grand Beach Resort

Are you getting married in a church? If not, you should use “pleasure,” not “honour.” If you do that, I would change “presence” to “company” or something like that. “Presence” is a bit stiff and feels like you jsut want them to stand there in attendance but not enjoy themselves. Also, usually you say “at their wedding.” Would you ask someone for the presence on your dinner party day or at your dinner party?

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