(Closed) is this wording ok??

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
Hostess
16213 posts
Honey Beekeeper

What about something like….

“We invite you to share in our joy

and celebrate the wedding of…”

How formal/informal is your wedding?

 

Post # 6
Member
2600 posts
Sugar bee
  • Wedding: June 2011

I think Gemstone’s wording is awesome – same feel as yours but a little less wordy/awkward.

We used Together with their families even though it’s Fiance & I and my parents covering everything. It worked for us and no one was upset.

 

Post # 7
Member
9029 posts
Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2011

I like Gemstone’s  suggestion

Post # 8
Hostess
16213 posts
Honey Beekeeper

@CountryBee11: I think it could be implied based on who the return address on the invite is, and who you return RSVPs to. 🙂

Post # 10
Member
4583 posts
Honey bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

Our wording will most likely be:

iheartnerds

and

Mr. iheartnerds

Invite you to share in their joy

as they exchange wedding vows

 

Which I like because it’s short and simple but still fairly personal. Of course, we’re paying for the wedding ourselves and don’t plan on mentioning our parents on the invitation at all. But maybe it could be tweaked to work for you.

Post # 11
Member
2161 posts
Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: July 2011

@iheartnerds:  Ditto that!   It sounds like you are inviting them, instead of some unknown host.  🙂

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