(Closed) judge my monogram…

posted 7 years ago in DIY
Post # 3
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

I like it, but I feel like it would look better if the circle was an oval. 

Post # 4
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: March 2012

I like it, but Im not crazy about the 3 circles all together.

I think if you pick either the dotted line and a solid line it will look a little less distracting. It kinda hurts my eyes with all the circles.

Maybe try the dotted line outside the yellow line and leave the other solid brown line out?

 

ETA: Maybe you could try making the dots a little larger and more spread out

Post # 5
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: January 2016

I love it how it is! 🙂

Post # 6
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: January 1991

Aww, I think it’s cute! 🙂

Post # 7
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: January 1999

Love the colors and the pattern of the monogram.  Not so fond of the N, &,  i & k (in Patrick).  It appears as if someone traced over the pen strokes or something (if that makes sense).  Can that be fixed so it looks more “smooth”?  Otherwise, awesome!! 

Post # 8
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Helper bee

I like it how it is, except for MAYBE a different font (unless you have already seen it printed) because it looks like the words may jumble up a bit.

Post # 9
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: May 2012

I like it a lot, but my eye keeps focusing on how much white space there is.  Would you consider putting your names on separate lines with the ampersand in the middle?

Post # 10
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: February 2011

IMO the ‘r’ in ‘Patrick’ is too close to the ‘t’ and too far away from the ‘ick’. Oh, and maybe move the ampersand so there’s even distance between it and each of your names instead having it centered within the circle. Right now it’s kind of squished against his name.

But overall I think it looks awesome!

Post # 11
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

I like it as is.

And I am very, very fussy!

Post # 12
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: July 2011

I agree that there is a lot of white space.  I think spacing it out like what @KristenGotMarried: suggested would work a little better.

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