(Closed) Just finished our save the dates.. need feedback please!

posted 5 years ago in Paper
  • poll: What do you think of our save the dates?
    They are perfect, don't change anything! : (20 votes)
    43 %
    They are ok, but you should change something. (comment please) : (17 votes)
    36 %
    Version number 2 in the comments is better : (9 votes)
    19 %
    Scrap them both and try again. : (1 votes)
    2 %
  • Post # 3
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    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: August 2013

    It’s really cute!

    Post # 4
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    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: September 2013 - B&B

    Oh they are pretty!!!! I like them!

    Post # 5
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    38 posts
    Newbee
    • Wedding: December 2013

    Love the colors and the font! 

    Post # 6
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    9917 posts
    Buzzing Beekeeper
    • Wedding: June 2013

    They’re extremely girly.  How does your fiance feel about that?

    Post # 7
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    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: Central Park

    Change the silver font to ivory because I can’t read it. I would also enlarge the bottom font, the last line is going to be very hard to read. I would also make the date the same width as the Save the Date for symmetry.

    Post # 8
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    1022 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: July 2013

    I agree it was hard for me to read it, it might be the fonts or the colors.

    Post # 9
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    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: October 2011

    @HisToots:  Very pretty! I would suggest changing the font color of the “for the marriage of”, the date, and the last line. The gray is difficult to read and so is the font style of the last line. Just a little hard on the eyes. You want the date to stand out so people see it and remember it. Perhaps a dark silver? What are your colors?

    Post # 10
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    1854 posts
    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: May 2013

    I think the at last are too far apart. Bring them closer! Other then that- cute!

    Post # 11
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    8461 posts
    Bumble Beekeeper
    • Wedding: April 2013

    @HisToots:  First off, super cute!  I’m probably biased because pink and damask are two of my fave things.  As for changes, it looks off center; not sure if it’s how WB uploaded it, but your design favors the left (just saw your edit, no you’re not going crazy, it’s off).  Second, for the silver lettering, I would recommend putting a <1pt black line around the lettering.  Not sure what program you did this is, but if it’s Adobe, it should be pretty easy.  Other than that, I think they’re perfect.

    Post # 13
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    Buzzing Beekeeper
    • Wedding: August 2013 - Rocky Mountains USA

    It took me a while to read the “At Last”, to be honest.  Could you use a different font that’s pretty, but not quite so elaborate?

    Post # 14
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    1279 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: May 2013

    @HisToots:  I really like the background colors and patterns. I did have to really look to figure out “At Last” but,  it only took a couple seconds then I got it.

    Post # 15
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    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: September 2013

    @michiru4ever:  +1. The grey is hard to read, otherwise I love it!

     

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