(Closed) ladies i need some help

posted 7 years ago in Relationships
Post # 3
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: April 2013

I’d rather read something more personal, so I can feel like I’m getting to know you guys! 🙂 Good luck!

Post # 7
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

@aprose: That’s a neat contest. I hope it works out for you! I think the more personal, honest and unique your bio and essay, the better. Speak from the heart and write from that place rather than what you think they want to hear. (Not saying you’re doing this, but I think they’re going to read quite a lot of people saying their Fiance is their “rock” and “best friend.” Find another way to say it. How? Well you might explain exactly how is he your rock and best friend.) In fact, I think your opening sentence could very well be this one because it instantly grasps the reader in its sincerity: 

“i may be young but i have come to appreciate that life is the thing that happens between your plans and that to really appreciate the good in life you need to accept the bad.”

Good luck!

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