(Closed) Main card help! Do we need to change anything?

posted 5 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

Looks good! I’m in the process of doing this too! ๐Ÿ™‚

I’d leave out “and begin this joyful journey on” as I think it sounds too much like a run-on and I’m a fan of conciseness. If you love it and decide to keep it, maybe change the “this” to “our” (and begin OUR joyful journey…)

Post # 4
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

I also vote to leave out the “begin this joyful journey”

Post # 7
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

@blessings:  i think it sounds good! I am sure you would catch the spelling on thirteen

Post # 8
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: April 2014

Are you including the dress code anywhere? maybe on the details card?

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