(Closed) More Wording Help for Invitation

posted 8 years ago in Paper
  • poll: Which reads better?
    celebrate the wedding of... : (9 votes)
    90 %
    the wedding celebration of... : (1 votes)
    10 %
  • Post # 3
    Hostess
    18641 posts
    Honey Beekeeper
    • Wedding: June 2009

    I like the first wording better,

    Post # 5
    Member
    1328 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: July 2011

    I like the first one better, but “celebrate the marriage of” would sound even better!

    The topic ‘More Wording Help for Invitation’ is closed to new replies.

    Find Amazing Vendors