(Closed) My DIY invitations, thoughts?

posted 8 years ago in Paper
  • poll: Thoughts on this DIY invite?
    Looks great, run with it! : (18 votes)
    45 %
    Looks ok, but needs some work (please explain) : (19 votes)
    48 %
    Scrap the idea and go with stock invites : (3 votes)
    8 %
  • Post # 3
    4675 posts
    Honey bee
    • Wedding: August 2012

    I like where you are going with this!  The one thing that i really like in the first invite that you didn’t use was how the text lined up with a left orientation after your names and with the names pushed out a little more.  

    Post # 4
    2814 posts
    Sugar bee
    • Wedding: March 2012

    I love it!!  You did a great job!

    Post # 5
    178 posts
    Blushing bee
    • Wedding: May 2013

    I think yours looks great. I honestly like it bette than the original.

    Post # 6
    2104 posts
    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: November 1999

    I think I like the font in the first one better, but otherwise it looks great

    Post # 7
    1064 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: June 2012

    Think it looks good, I do not like the font though.

    Post # 9
    1446 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: May 2012

    I think it looks fantastic-great job!

    Post # 10
    3977 posts
    Honey bee
    • Wedding: May 2011

    In addition to the font orientation and style, I would narrow the trunk o the tree if you can, it looks rather unnatural as it is.

    Post # 11
    3460 posts
    Sugar bee
    • Wedding: May 2012

    I would also narrow the tree trunk slightly.  I would also either add more grass or eliminate what you have.  Tree top looks great!  Are you going to mention FI’s parents on the invite (“son of….”)?

    Post # 12
    5091 posts
    Bee Keeper
    • Wedding: January 2012

    Very cute!  You shouldn’t capitalize the words at the beginning of each line, though, unless that line begins a new sentence.

    Post # 13
    899 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: November 1999

    @Tigrrlily04:  I think that font is cute for you names, but I would choose a different one for the other text of the invite. 

    I really like the feel of your invite, but the color is throwing me off. I think it should all be in greyscale or you should add a punch of color in the tree – even if it is subtle, like a muted green or brown. 

    Your leaves on the tree look great, but I would taper the trunk of the tree a little at the top and thin it out. The proportion of tree leaves to trunk is just a tiny bit off. 

    I just want to claify that they look really nice now – just giving you some critiques to make them perfect! 


    Post # 14
    347 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: October 2010

    I like what you have so far – but a few changes I would make is to make the trunk of the tree a little skinnier (like others have suggested) and to make the tree top not so full…..  Other than that – keep up the good work!

    Post # 15
    1111 posts
    Bumble bee
    • Wedding: October 2012

    I like them, but would play around with the font a little to find the perfect one.

    Post # 16
    385 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: July 2012

    I would try right-justifying it to see how it looked.  The centered text doesn’t look quite right to me at the moment.  Also, too many words are capitalized.  It should probably be something like this:

    Mr. and Mrs. John Doe
    request the pleasure of your company
    at the marriage of their daughter

    Jane Marie


    Bob Doe

    Saturday, the second of June
    two thousand and twelve
    at six o’clock in the evening

    Dinner, dancing, and celebration to follow!

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