(Closed) My DIY Invite First Part – Need Opinions

posted 5 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

I love it! I wish I had have said drinks, dinner and dancing rather than reception to follow. Sounded too stuffy for us. Love your colours too.

Post # 5
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

@Bella_and_Max:  I love it! My only item: I find the fluffy writting a bit too hard to read and would search for a fancy but more legible version. I’m more of a stickler though as I work for the government assessing the “Accessibility” of documents and websites for persons with disabilities 🙂

 

 

Btw, given that you said something about STD and oyur wedding is in September, I don’t think you really need them at this point. So you can save the time/money on that 🙂

Post # 6
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: October 2014 - Disney

Love these absolutely gorgeous.

Post # 7
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: July 2014

@Elky:  +1 on the the purple font not being legible enough.  there’s probably something that still has the effect you like that’s easier to read.

Post # 8
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

The design is very nice and I love the quote. However a couple of things seemed a bit off to me:

1) capitalization is very odd. Why capitalize “The” in “the twenty eights”, capitalize the word husband, but not wife? Why are drinks dinner and dancing are capitalized? 

2) wording “share with them” is a little awkward. Share the day? share the joy? Maybe look at some invite samples to get an idea for wording?

Sorry if the criticisms are too much.

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