(Closed) My DIY invites…opinions please but be gentle! (pic heavy)

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Post # 17
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: November 2012

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@Mz Izzie:  That’s not right. 

As the band prides iteself on providing their guest with a wonderful experience.


This is not a sentence; it’s a fragment. The comma in the OP’s original wording is correct.

It should be guests, not guest.

Post # 18
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

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@sweetcrackers:  

Sorry my typo…lol. Yes it supposed to be guests. Thanks..lol

My main things were with and itself.

Again thanks….:)

Post # 19
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: November 2012

“The band prides itself on providing its guests with a wonderful experience, so please list…”

OR make it two sentences.

“The band prides itself on providing its guests with a wonderful experience. Please list…”

Band is a singular collective (in American English), you’d say “the band is playing” not “the band are playing.” So, the band prides ITSELF and ITS guests, not THEIRselves and THEIR guests.

I love the little map, by the way. The change from all-caps is also a major plus.

Post # 21
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: November 2012

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@Mz Izzie:  I’m not allowed to be a teacher because I’m a total punctuation beeyotch. I commend your patience :o)

Post # 23
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: November 2011

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@sehrler:  This revision looks better. Could you possibly download a new font package? I’m attempting not to sound harsh but the current font screams I did this in word. 

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@abbie017:  agree about the band info

Post # 27
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: November 2012

Cute, and much improved! I like the info on your “Information” card, it explains things nicely and shows a little fun fact about you two. 

Post # 29
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

Looks great!!! Taking off the caps made a big difference, and now they look amazing!!! I just love the map and the rope tie Smile

Happy I could help! Smile

Post # 31
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Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: September 2011

YAY it all looks awesome! Hooray for it all coming together!

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