Post # 1
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Busy bee
- Wedding: September 2015 - Historic Chapel
First draft of my DIY wedding menus and I love them! Would love your opinions! Sorry for the giant pic, can’t figure out how to make it smaller!
Post # 2
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Bumble bee
Personally under salad I would make a new line for the dressings,
i would also make a new line for “mango salsa”
And, I’m confused, are you serving wedding cake and choc. cupcakes or choc. cupcakes? It sounds like your trying to describe the choc. cupcakes as wedding cake.. but cake and cupcakes are different.
Post # 3
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Buzzing bee
jnm_sha: i think it looks great! the only thing that i noticed is in your dessert section. Are you having wedding cake cupcakes or wedding cake and cupcakes? if the latter, I would put them on separate lines, or have a comma between them!
Post # 4
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Busy bee
- Wedding: September 2015 - Historic Chapel
MrsPhishBee: Good point on the different lines! I will do that!
cirk: My whole cake will be just cupcakes, so no actual cake per say. Should I just put chocolate cupcakes?
Thanks girls!
Post # 5
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Bumble bee
jnm_sha: I would just put chof. Cupcakes 🙂
Post # 6
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Helper bee
Agreed with first poster. I also wouldn’t capitalize almost every word, unless it’s the first word, a certain brand, ect.
Post # 7
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Buzzing bee
jnm_sha: i would say chocolate cup cakes then!
Post # 8
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Busy bee
- Wedding: September 2015 - Historic Chapel
Great feed back ladies! Thank you 
Post # 9
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Helper bee
jnm_sha: looks yummy! From an editing standpoint, I think no comma after the word vinaigrette.
Post # 10
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Sugar Beekeeper
jnm_sha: Love the design! Agree with previous comments and sorry if this has been said already, but the description for the salad course is too long and it needs a comma before with, perhaps worded the same as the vegetable medley so the detail is in brackets. Agree with a PP regarding cupcakes, no need for the word cake twice. Good job!
Post # 11
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Busy bee
- Wedding: July 2015 - Beautiful place.
jnm_sha: your memu looks great!!!!!
I got mine as a gift from a friend that has a business printing invitations and everything related to parties!!
here it is, but my name is Daiana and sorry it is in Portuguese, im in Brazil!! And the wedding is July 4!!!!! 17 days to go! 😱😍👰🏼😘
Post # 12
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Busy bee
- Wedding: September 2015 - Historic Chapel
CatyLady: Good idea! I will make the description the same as the vegetables.
daiperlato: Love your menu! It looks beautiful.
Post # 13
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Busy bee
You could even do chocolate wedding cupcakes if you want the word wedding in there 🙂 I think they’re absolutely gorgeous. I love the pearls!
Post # 14
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Blushing bee
jnm_sha: Looks great so far! The only thing I notice besides the great feedback from other PPs is that the spacing between the line that says “herb roasted chicken” and the line under it seems to be smaller than the spacing between the lines for other courses.
Post # 15
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Blushing bee
I would remove “Course” after Salad. If you end up with enough room after making edits I would also make your initials larger, the same size as Menu. Overall I think you did a great job!