(Closed) My invitations

posted 8 years ago in Paper
Post # 4
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2011

Your invitations are beautiful. Not too busy at all. I love the tree and the “Dancing Under the Stars” in a different font with stars.

Post # 5
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

I think it looks perfect!! Congrats!!

Post # 6
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: August 2010

Very nice.  Get rid of the ‘s after groom.  It’s not needed.

Post # 7
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Busy bee

Very nice!

Post # 8
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: July 2011

Just a heads up, you have a random possessive: “at the residence of the father of the groom’s.” That would read better as “at the residence of the groom’s father” or “at the residence of the father of the groom.” Regardless of which you choose, I don’t know that you want to keep the stray apostrophe S.

Post # 9
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: May 2010

Looks great! Ditto sunnydebs, it should read either “at the residence of the father of the groom” or “at the father of the groom’s residence” whichever you prefer.

I would also change the ampersand in “two thousand & ten” to “and” or I would delete it entirely. Either way is fine. 

Post # 10
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: July 2011

Um they AMAZING!!!! Great job!!! Super cute 🙂

Post # 11
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

i think this is so lovely!! i also love the tree and the “night under the stars”… so pretty!

Post # 13
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: February 2010

love the tree illustration

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