Post # 1
Take a look at my invites! If you see grammar, spelling or any other mistakes, please let me know. I haven’t ordered them yet. Just wanted to make sure everything was correct. I am worried that I left out some commas. Thanks in advance.
Post # 3
They look good. My only suggestion would be to change this:
__ will __ will not aattend
__ of __ will attend
And maybe change “by” in the second line to “with”?
Post # 4
I would change the RSVP slightly:
Kindly respond by May 24, 2013
____ will attend
____ will not attend
____ vegetarian meal(s) requested
Number of vegetarian meals requested: ___
I agree that “with” sounds better than “by” in the invitation.
“Honor of your presence” is traditionally used when the wedding takes place in a house of worship, versus “pleasure of your company” or something similar when it does not. Your ceremony location is blocked out, so I’m not sure which one should be used, or if you are even striving for traditional wording 🙂