(Closed) My STD's, what do you think?

posted 6 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Honey Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

I think the text is a little hard to read.  Could you make it bold, or a different color, so it would stand out more? 

Post # 4
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Newbee
  • Wedding: May 2013

I agree with PP that the text is hard to read. Have you considered including a pic of you and your Fiance instead of a clipart pic? I think it would make it more personal.

Post # 5
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Buzzing bee

I would not say 4PM is in the evening….maybe just say 4:00 p.m. instead of “in the evening”.  Or you don’t even have to put the time if it’s just a STD.  

Post # 6
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: March 2013

I also find it hard to read and I would defintely use a picture of you and your fiancee or none at all. Good luck!

Post # 7
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

I agree it’s kind of hard to read and I also agree that you shouldn’t have the time on there either nor should you have where it will be. It’s just a save the date so you’re basically just telling people to mark the date on their calendar.

Post # 8
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: July 2012

I agree that the time isn’t necessary, just date and town, state. The red gradiant background isn’t very intriguing or aesthetically pleasing, IMO…there are much better options out there for STD layouts.

Post # 9
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Worker bee

IMO the red is too much – I am guessing red will be your weddng colour on the day? If so perhaps a red patterned border reflecting your theme? Something like –

Then the writing would show up better on the white…..I think all the wording is fine but I agree with a pp that the image (if you want to include one) should be something personal…find a lovely pic of the two of you (black and white photo would be gorgeous)

     

Post # 10
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: April 2013

Um you guys I could be wrong but I’m pretty sure the pic is just a placeholder lol. 

OP I think they look good, but I would agree that maybe either make the font a little bigger or make it bold so it’s a bit easier to read (granted I’m looking at the pic on my phone so maybe it’s ok in real life)

Post # 12
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: June 2012

I think it includes too much info!  It looks like an invitation.  Bare minimums:

 

Fluffy’s Mom and Fluffy’s Dad are tying the knot!

April 14, 2014 (Hope these aren’t going out for a long time!  No one’s calendars go that far!)

Your town, USA

Formal invitation to follow

http://www.yourwebsite.com

Post # 13
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: June 2014

I agree that it has too much information on it. Just put less info in bigger text. I also think it would look good with a larger picture of you two!  

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