(Closed) My Vows, please critique and help to shorten, if possible!

posted 7 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: May 2011

I totally teared up reading this.  It’s beautiful.

Post # 4
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Newbee
  • Wedding: July 2011

I wouldn’t shorten it all…I think it’s perfect just the way it is…I think you’ll be suprised how fast it goes…when you read it…

Post # 5
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2011

Your vows are so beautiful. I don’t think you need to change a thing about them.

Post # 6
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

sounds heartfelt and i don’t think there is really any way to shorten it. way to go!

Post # 7
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: July 2013

Beautiful!! I got goosebumps/tingles reading it. I’m sure on the day of, being read aloud, and heard by those who love you both it will be so perfect!!

Post # 8
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Newbee
  • Wedding: August 2011

Gorgeous…don’t shorten!

Post # 9
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: October 2011

wow! very touching and personal. I don’t think you need to change a thing!

Post # 10
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Sugar bee

I would not change a THING! Beautiful.

Post # 11
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: November 2011

Thank you so much for posting this!! After trying to find posts that showed longer vows like this, I was afraid I would have to significantly cut down on mine. But your vows are absolutely beautiful and I wouldn’t change a thing. Mine are comparable in length, so it’s made me more positive about reading them on the big day!

Post # 12
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2011

@armywife1029: I got goosebumps reading this as well. I think you did a fabulous shop. In my opinion you don’t need to shorten them AT ALL! 🙂

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