(Closed) My vows! Please let me know what you think. =D

posted 6 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
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Helper bee

I think it sounds really nice, maybe a little long though. 

Post # 4
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

I agree – it sounds great, but it seems a little long.

Post # 5
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Bumble bee

I agree maybe a TAD long (only because I’ve always heard the traditional sort of quick vows) but the words are really beautiful. As long as you dont mind the length, I thinik it’s awesome! <3

Post # 6
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

I think it’s soooo sweet. It doesn’t seem that long. I’m writing my own vows too and dreading it

Post # 7
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: June 2010

These are very nice. however, pretty long. You need to cut it down. Good luck!

Post # 9
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Busy bee

@quishi:  I like them. I think it looks long but it doesn’t take long to read it so I think it’s fine.  Good job!

Post # 10
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: June 2014 - Ontario, Canada โ™ฅ EDD- April 2016

I think they’re sweet (: if I was a guest at your wedding I would totally tear up ๐Ÿ˜‰

Post # 11
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2012

I love when ppl write their own vows. They r great words and I don’t think they are too long. ๐Ÿ™‚

Post # 12
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: October 2012

beautiful words

Post # 13
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Bumble Beekeeper

Very emotional!  Just make sure that he takes care to write similar vows so he’s not left standing up there stuttering with 3 lines written down on a napkin, you know?  Hehe.  ๐Ÿ™‚

Post # 14
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Blushing bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

They sound wonderful! We couldn’t decide if we wanted to write our own vows…but reading these is really making me want to!

Post # 15
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: September 2012

Very sweet! This is probably me being lucky but there seems to be “strive for” repeated a lot in the last paragraph though.

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Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: March 2012

Those are beautifully written. ๐Ÿ™‚ I like them.

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