(Closed) My vows..please help edit!

posted 7 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 3
7300 posts
Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: September 2012

I think they are fine. Have you spoken them at a reading pace? I just read them aloud and it didn’t seem like that long actually. 

If you want to cut something, I would cut something out in the beginning. The rest of it is awesome. You could probably cut out the rugby player thing and maybe shorten the 2 hour phone talks and a date at Friendly’s. IF you want to include that info in your ceremony, have your officiant say something about it. ๐Ÿ™‚ 

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