(Closed) Need advice..

posted 9 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
1454 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: December 1969

Not sure what should and shouldn’t be capitalized…

Also I think this:

invite you to share in the joy 
of the uniting in marrieage of their children

Should be:

invite you to share in the joy 
of the uniting their children in marriage

And make sure marriage is spelled right!

Post # 4
6597 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: August 2010

What about something like this? I bolded what I changed!

“Once in a while 
Right In the Middle of an ordinary life
Love gives us a fairytale”

Mr. and Mrs Bride
Mr. and Mrs Groom
invite you to witness a real life fairytale as


get married on Saturday, the twenty fourth day of July
two thousand and ten
at two o’clock in the afternoon

Post # 5
56 posts
Worker bee
  • Wedding: October 2010

I’m using that quote on the inside flap of my envelopes so that’s always an option.  It’s something I know people will see but still unexpected. 

@future mrs martin:  love the idea of incorporating the “fairy tale” wording into the body of the invite. great idea!

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