(Closed) Need DIY RSVP DRAFT comments ASAP. FI is USELESS!!!

posted 9 years ago in DIY
Post # 3
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: November 2009

either take out “the” so it reads September 12, 2009

 

or

 

change it to “the 12th of September 2009

Post # 4
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2018

I personally don’t love the look of the second line. Do you think you’ll have an issue with people over-rsvping? Also, on the first like “Please Join Us in Celebrating”…celebrating what? I would write “Please join us to Celebrate” or Please Join Us in Celebrating Our Marriage” or something similar. Love the fonts!

As far as the Fiance goes, pick your battles. If he doesn’t care, don’t sweat it. It’s not worth a fight. They’ll be great!

Post # 5
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: September 2009

I agree with KateMW about “in celebrating,” you need something after that or just use “celebrate” or the English teacher in me freaks out. 🙂

I assume you’re going to write in the number of guests in the blank. Everything else is fine but the anal English teacher in me (I have a lot of different English teachers in me) would make the words “accepts” and “declines” lower case, there’s no reason for them to be upper case.

Also, remember you don’t have to use British spelling. Maybe since it’s a backyard wedding it’s a little more informal and you use American spelling. It’s something not many will notice I’m sure lol. (honor, favor) It’s really up to you, who cares

I like it!

Post # 7
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Sugar bee
  • Wedding: September 2009

2nd draft looks great!

Post # 8
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Worker bee
  • Wedding: September 2009

Looks great!

Post # 9
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: October 2009

We did: We look forward to celebrating with you…..

Post # 10
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Sugar Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 2010

love the second draft!

Post # 11
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2010

The 2nd draft is good to go, in my opinion. 

 

Post # 13
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2018

I like the 2nd draft!

Post # 14
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: May 2010

btw, i like the “we have reserved __ seats in your honor” bit

Post # 15
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: May 2010

love the font!!

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