(Closed) Need second opinion on wedding invites ASAP! :-) THANKS!

posted 5 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: August 2014

I design invitations for a living, and I personally MUCH prefer option 2.

Post # 4
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: December 2013

Option two 🙂 although the first one is nice, I’ve seen the desing a few times.

 

Post # 5
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Newbee

I like the first one better.

As far as the wording, I’d change “company for” to “company on”. I’d also change the font size or put some space between the main body of the invite text and the location. 

Post # 6
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: August 2013 - Rocky Mountains USA

I like them both but #2 is my favorite.  On wording, replace the period with a COMMA after “with your friendship and love”.  Otherwise it’s just a sentence fragment (since it begins with “Because”).

Post # 7
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Buzzing bee
  • Wedding: June 2013

I prefer option 2! I actually looked at using the first one through Vistaprint for my own invitations but Fiance and I decided against it because we didn’t love just having the one green color. It would probably look much better if you changed the font or made the lines that don’t include your names in a smaller size like Vistaprint originally has it. Also I would put “picnic brunch to follow” in the same font as your names.

What are your wedding colors? Could you change option 2 to something other than the grey/yellow theme if those aren’t your colors?

Post # 8
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Bumble Beekeeper
  • Wedding: September 2013

I dont like #1 but I do like #2 a lot

Post # 9
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: October 2013 - The Down Town Club, Philadelphia

I think #2 is great. 

The wording is a little funky on #1, I think I should read, 

“Because you have shared in their lives with your friendship and love, Bride and Groom request the pleasure of your company on their big day!”

I think it all has to be third-person, or it just sounds off to me.

Post # 10
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Busy bee
  • Wedding: August 2014

I would go with option 2.. It’s very pretty and just looks overall better than the first one

Post # 11
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: December 2013

@jhadley85:  I really love the second option. The green on is ok, but I feel like the second one is a lot prettier and easier to look at =D

Post # 12
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Honey bee
  • Wedding: April 2014

Hey, I’m also Jennifer Hadley! (Lynn is my middle name) I like option 2 🙂

Post # 13
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: March 2014

I love the tree in the first one, but I would choose option 2! Really pretty, perfect for your casual brunch wedding and modern too. I think the wording is good, just seconding that comma instead of a fullstop before ‘We,’

Post # 14
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Bumble bee
  • Wedding: September 2013

I like #1 but not in green.

Post # 15
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: August 2013

I don’t really like the formating of #1 so I pick #2.

Post # 16
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: August 2011

SO love the 1st Love the tree.

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