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posted 3 years ago in Logistics
Post # 2
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9971 posts
Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: November 1999

I would do either “together with their families” or “it is with great joy” – but not both.  It just seems too wordy to me. I love the visual design. 

Post # 3
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103 posts
Blushing bee

You should check out yourself if the church and reception venue are easy to find on google maps, as in not easily confused with anything else. If it is clear where they need to arrive, I would keep the wording you have now but if there are similar places or maps won’t locate them exactly, add the address. Seems good so far 🙂 

Post # 4
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1333 posts
Bumble bee
  • Wedding: November 2019 - City, State

I agree that I would get rid of one of the opening lines – you can pick either “together with their families” or “it is with great joy,” but not both.  I would also probably just add a bit of clarification like “…to celebrate their marriage ceremony on:” and by adding “at:” onto the end of your “Reception to follow” line.  Not crazy necessary but makes it flow better.  I would also probably put an RSVP by date on there.

Post # 6
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634 posts
Busy bee

Looks great.

My OCD drives me nuts though with the fact that “together with their families” and “it is with great joy” isn’t perfectly centered so the alignment is off a bit

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