(Closed) Not sure which I like better

posted 6 years ago in Paper
  • poll: Which flourish design do you like better?
    The first cardinal invite : (41 votes)
    76 %
    The second cardinal invite : (13 votes)
    24 %
  • Post # 3
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    1963 posts
    Buzzing bee
    • Wedding: May 2013

    I like both, but the first one is less busy and more elegant in my very humble opinion : )  Good Luck!

    Post # 4
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    11270 posts
    Sugar Beekeeper
    • Wedding: April 2012

    i agree with pp that the first one is less busy but imho they are both pretty busy.  the flourish detail, the birds and the planes.  the bottom one has the flowers and hearts too.  there is too much going on.  the eye doesn’t know where to look, start or stop.

    i understand that you want to incorporate the planes too but perhaps do the birds on the invite and the planes on the rsvp.  remember, less is more.

    i do love the colours you picked.

    Post # 6
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    11270 posts
    Sugar Beekeeper
    • Wedding: April 2012

    @Bella_and_Max:  i really like both flourishes.  the top one is more elegant and formal where the bottom one is fun and flirty.

    Post # 8
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    699 posts
    Busy bee
    • Wedding: November 1999

    The second one looks a little 70’s ish IMO.

    Post # 9
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    4518 posts
    Honey bee
    • Wedding: September 2010

    I actually thought the 2nd one looked less busy & easier to read, but maybe I am crazy. With either one, I would delete the dots and planes from behind the text…too hard to read. Overall, I like them both!

    Post # 10
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    5778 posts
    Bee Keeper

    Do you even need any flourishes? I think I’d keep them more simple, as my eye doesn’t know where to look with these. I’d do one or the other (planes,birds OR flourishes)…or even just use the flourishes you like on the response cards or any other inserts.

    Post # 11
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    1935 posts
    Buzzing bee

    I like the second one a lot better. It’s less busy. The first one I was distracted wiht all the stuff going on, but in the second one the words stand out more and everything looks a little more put together.

    Post # 13
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    97 posts
    Worker bee
    • Wedding: September 2014

    I really like the first one

    Post # 14
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    6221 posts
    Bee Keeper
    • Wedding: August 2013 - The Liberty House

    I think the first one is best

    Post # 15
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    407 posts
    Helper bee
    • Wedding: November 2012

    I like the 2nd one. The first one is “more elegant” but the 2nd one is fun and artsy. If fun and artsy is your style, I would pick 2. If simple and elegant is your style, I would pick 1.

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