(Closed) On to reception card inserts… more proofing and critiques, please! :)

posted 7 years ago in Paper
Post # 3
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Buzzing Beekeeper
  • Wedding: June 2011

Is it meant to be all CAPS? Also what size is your insert card and is this all going to be on one card?

Post # 4
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

Since your card does not follow the most traditional wording, I think it’s weird that you’re spelling “favour” with a u (unless you do British spelling).

I think it’s a great idea to offer a live stream for your guests who can’t make it. My only comment on this, though, is that the live stream explanation takes up almost as much space as the rest of the wording. Couldn’t you shorten it and post the full explanation on the website?

Post # 5
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Busy Beekeeper
  • Wedding: September 2012

@SnowflakeDS: She’s a UK bride. That’s why it’s spelled with a “u”

I think you should shorten the live stream bit. I’m not sure how, but it should be shorter.

Post # 7
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Newbee

I would take the “at” out after celebration and just say:

Join us for an evening of

Dinner, Dancing, and Celebration

The Really Cool Hotel

City

Cocktails begin at half after two o’clock

*****

do you need to include street – is it the only “really cool hotel” in city?

Also, is the wedding taking place between cocktails and dinner?  if so, I would just list the one start time as you want people to be there at 2:30 right and not showing up at 4 PM?

Post # 9
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Helper bee
  • Wedding: August 2012

Looks well spaced. 🙂

Post # 10
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Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: January 1999

@UK Bride:  I really like your invitation!  Simple and Chic!  I’m not sure about the phrase “Welcome Drinks Served…”.  Is that a common saying in the UK?  Could you just say “Cocktails Served…” instead?  Just a thought…

Post # 11
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Sugar bee

I would leave off everything to do with the live stream on the invite. They have to go to the website to rsvp anyways, so I’d try to set up the site that tells people who RSVP no.

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