(Closed) opinions on my vows

posted 4 years ago in Ceremony
Post # 4
200 posts
Helper bee

@cuddlz88:  I think it is really good, except for the last line. I don’t think it is too short, I just don’t like the “good and bad times”, it comes off short.

I would expand on the idea of the last line, or add another line at the end like this I promise to you or something.

Post # 6
5014 posts
Bee Keeper
  • Wedding: September 2013

I agree, I’d add something more positive at the end. You don’t want to end your vows with “bad times!” It’s on the shorter side too, so you have room 🙂

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